Comment+Guide

Feedback is an important part of the writing process as it helps us to understand the relationship between the writer and reader. Your job is to provide meaningful feedback for other writers in the class. Make sure you provide detailed comments on each person's story. You should consider the following features:
 * Sensory language
 * "Showing not telling"
 * Characterisation
 * Plot
 * Setting
 * Mood & Tone
 * Dialogue

You may also want to discuss how well the narrative reveals an aspect of the writer's culture, which was one requirement of the task. //**Be generous and thoughtful with your praise and constructive in your criticism.**//